1. [words on HIDER ROSER by BEN MIROV]

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    Ben Mirov’s second full-length book of poetry

    contains the words ‘snow’ ‘black’ ‘green’ & ‘wolves’ a lot

    he has a preoccupation with dark snowy ‘settings’

    he speaks often of ‘Ben Mirov’ (third person)

    he has 5 or 6 poem titles w/ ‘Ben Mirov’ in them

    the poems themselves usually speak in ‘I’ or ‘you’

    the poems make me think Ben Mirov is ‘well-read’

    he references other texts & other writers consistently

    ‘my mind is a calm cool / bowl of shaving cream’

    this line reminds me that Ben Mirov is ‘really good’ at speaking of the ‘abstract’ / ‘metaphysical’

    in tangible ways

    a nice blend between very ‘composed’ & ‘delicate’

    & allowing the imagination to push itself wildly

    Ben Mirov’s ‘imagination’ seems ‘exceptional’

    & although his material often explores similar material

    he somehow accomplishes fresh energy throughout the whole book

    in fact, I’ve read the book ~ 3 times already

    Ben Mirov sent me this book for free

    if you ever meet him you will realize that he’s very kind & dryly funny

    & honest

    like his poems perhaps

    & I really enjoy his style of reading

    he delivers his often dark // cosmic poems in a deadpan / borderline robotic tone of voice

    the result is humorous

    he takes me simultaneously into vivid imagination & an almost absurdist sense of humor

    Ben Mirov’s ‘speakers’ often say things like

    ‘I have no idea what I’m doing’

    but this ‘not knowing’ often leads to a certain type of ‘innocence’ or ‘Beginner’s Mind’

    that views the world like this

    ‘I feel like I have never seen anything / and I am seeing things for the first time / and this is the first thing I have ever seen’

    ‘innocence’ may not be the right word

    idk

    the poems are concerned w/ ‘darkness’

    ‘nothingness’

    ‘Loneliness is something more / than nothingness’

    they seem to be concerned w/ the spark

    the birth of a moment arising from a fertile void

    of language arising

    he weaves scientific language & the ‘colloquial’

    plainspoken

    straightforward, brief

    ‘You will no longer feel like punching yourself in the face twice a day. You will not feel guilty about paying tons of money to attend grad school’

    clipped

    I love when he has a series of ‘end-stopped’ lines

    & then suddenly a sentence enjambs for like 5 or 6 lines

    these poems are philosophical & ‘hip’

    his work seems to have the rare opportunity to appeal to the ‘academy’ & the ‘alternative culture(s)’

    maybe not all his poems will appeal to one or the other

    but they have a bluntness, sophistication, & postmodern sensibility // playfulness

    that strikes an intriguing balance

    here are some of my favorite moments:

    ‘The water is beautiful and she allows you / to put your arm around her. / Smell her ear, part of a star / that exploded when you were negative / 10, 000 years old’

    ‘you probably think you’re not alive at all / or that being alive is a button inside you’

    ‘When I think of our relationship / I think of a magician / with a dove in his pants / or a giraffe that must fall / six feet to be born’

    ‘I pet a moth as big as a baby’

    ‘Now open your eyes. / Not those eyes. / The eyes inside you’

    When you have carried [the eyeball] far enough / give it to the next person you meet. / Or bury it in a pile of shards. / Or smash it on a rock’

     


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